Friday 6 February 2015

His Last Daydream

There’s a story about a man who stole a look and was given a strange punishment, a story Andrew thought about every time he’d crossed the square to work.

This time, as was usually the case, Andrew found himself imagining how it would’ve looked that fateful day as the man had casually made his way.

In his mind’s eye Andrew saw, superimposed upon the modern scene, all the trappings of its former self from the muck strewn ground, to the old town hall and stalls of all kinds.

It became more real as he walked, the sounds and smells appearing too, until Andrew imagined the cart as it approached and, as it drew alongside, he thought about what, if he’d really existed, that poor man might have seen.

In an instant he was there, Andrew left the dream and entered reality.  The cart was in his peripheral vision, its occupant reaching down to adjust a shoe.  Out of curiosity, Andrew turned and saw too much.

A voice whispered, “Thank you,” another condemned him and Andrew found himself cursed to ever walk across the square, resetting as he reached the far side back to the first.  Always he must walk, always with his head firmly down.

Until another imagined strongly enough.


Written for Flash! Friday: the prompts were the following picture and the required story element of a fleeting moment.
Rain (Liberia, Guanacaste, Costa Rica). CC2.0 photo by NannyDaddy. 

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